# HG changeset patch
# User Benjamin Golinvaux <bgo@osimis.io>
# Date 1606807876 -3600
# Node ID 1952162474c3282de0ec555e13e257f855ce326d
# Parent  a878e807cd96f1bafcff2475048203eb251c4aa5
A few æsthetic changes in the text body

diff -r a878e807cd96 -r 1952162474c3 Applications/StoneWebViewer/NOTES.txt
--- a/Applications/StoneWebViewer/NOTES.txt	Mon Nov 30 17:57:10 2020 +0100
+++ b/Applications/StoneWebViewer/NOTES.txt	Tue Dec 01 08:31:16 2020 +0100
@@ -7,17 +7,17 @@
 
 
 - In the Stone Web viewer, the individual instances are loaded on
-  need, in order to reduce the use of the network bandwidth. This
-  contrasts with the Osimis Web viewer that loads the entire images in
-  background.
+  an as-needed basis, in order to reduce the network bandwidth usage.
+  This contrasts with the Osimis Web viewer that loads the entire images
+  in the background.
 
 
-- Contrarily to the Osimis Web viewer, the Stone Web viewer doesn't
+- Contrarily to the Osimis Web viewer, the Stone Web viewer does not
   currently support annotations, and will not support Live Share.
 
 
-- The Stone Web viewer uses the DICOM identifiers. The Osimis Web
-  viewer the Orthanc identifiers.
+- The Stone Web viewer uses the DICOM identifiers, while the Osimis Web
+  viewer uses the Orthanc identifiers.
   https://book.orthanc-server.com/faq/orthanc-ids.html
 
   In the Stone Web viewer, the studies are indexed by their "Study
@@ -71,7 +71,7 @@
   comma-separated list of studies.
 
   To make a list of studies available, but display only one of those
-  studies when the viewer starts:
+  studies when the viewer starts, please use:
   http://.../index.html?study=<StudyInstanceUID1>,<StudyInstanceUID2>,...&selectedStudies=<StudyInstanceUID1>
 
   If the "selectedStudies" is not provided, then all the studies are